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The bar charts beneath illustrate how many individuals owned computer systems by training stage from 2002 to 2021.
General, the proportion of pc customers enhance step by step over the interval. As well as, the extra educated individuals bought, the extra computer systems they owned. Furthermore, no matter training stage, the proportion of individuals utilizing a pc in 2010 was at all times increased than the determine in 2002.
About over 50% of the inhabitants owned a pc in 2002, with a major rise to almost 80% of individuals. In 2002, there was solely 15% of people that had not completed highschool owned computer systems, however this determine trebled in 2020 to roughly 45%. Equally, the proportion of scholars who completed highschool noticed a double from 35% to 70% over the interval.
There was average development within the proportion of each post-graduated and after graduated college students all through the interval from 50% to 80% and 65% to 85% respectively. The determine for postgraduate qualification college students remained the best determine in 8-year-period and witnessed a slight enhance from 70% in 2002 to over 90% in 2010.